Much improved.Changes to consider:You don't need the 'pre-order...'Get rid of the website adddressSpell DECEMBER correctlyMake the twiiter address smallerI'll talk to you next lesson
Much improved.
ReplyDeleteChanges to consider:
You don't need the 'pre-order...'
Get rid of the website adddress
Spell DECEMBER correctly
Make the twiiter address smaller
I'll talk to you next lesson